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PostSubject: Order Form   Order Form Icon_minitimeThu Aug 09, 2007 3:59 pm

Hi everyone...

I have made a prototpyr odering form and i was wondering what you all thought of it as it is now?

you can view it http://www.freewebs.com/haauk/ukcmporderform.htm

Please DON'T submit a copy as this UK cmp form does work

Thanx

Neil.
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PostSubject: Re: Order Form   Order Form Icon_minitimeThu Aug 09, 2007 4:01 pm

Hey Neil, The overall form is great ... It looks nicely designed and i particularly like the 5 order option windows.

Now, I'm not trying to be a smart arse here, but you asked for comments ...

I trust you spotted the typo - "5 casts each, to give oters a chance. "

and I think the following reds a little clumsily:

A PAYPAL invoice will be sent to your e mail address so that you can pay for this order that you are about to place to the UK cmp.

Maybe reads better as:

A PAYPAL invoice will be sent to your email address. Please follow the PayPal instructions to complete your order.

And finally, If the form was mine I would drop the asterisks adjacent the "order line" windows and put one at the bottom with the following:

* indicates required fields.

Simply because if I see an asterisk on a form I have to go see what the clause is.
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PostSubject: Re: Order Form   Order Form Icon_minitimeThu Aug 09, 2007 4:01 pm

Hi everyone...

Thanx scouseyuk

I have edited the prototpye odering form and i was wondering what you all thought of it as it is now?

you can view it here

Please DON'T submit a copy as this UK cmp form does work

Thanx

Neil.
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PostSubject: Re: Order Form   Order Form Icon_minitimeThu Aug 09, 2007 4:03 pm

Looking better but still a few typo's

Change Frist Name to First Name
Change SurName to Surname
and last
Change oters to others
The form seems nicely laid out, simple, and easy to follow. I think it's fine

Regards

BillyWiz
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PostSubject: Re: Order Form   Order Form Icon_minitimeThu Aug 09, 2007 4:03 pm

Hi everyone...

Thanx billywizuk

I have edited the prototpye odering form and i was wondering what you all thought of it as it is now?

just click here on the post that i did above.

Thanx

Neil.
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